HypNovember Collection 2025

7. Don't Visit the Lake at Night

by AmusCobblestone

Tags: #cw:noncon #cw:protagonist_death #dom:female #dom:male #f/f #f/m #sub:female #sub:male #dom:nb #domestic #induction #mass_hypnosis #microfiction #multiple_partners #sub:nb #titnosis

All events and characters in the following story are fictional and intended for adults over 18. The story contains fantastical depictions of mind control, hypnosis, and probably contains dubcon/CNC elements. The events depicted are for the sole purpose of recreation and roleplay. None of the events should be interpreted as any kind of facsimile of reality. NONE of the following writing is permitted to be used to train any kind of LLM or AI language program. None of the following writing should be reproduced without the express permission of the author.

“Don’t visit the lake at night!”

That was what Eli’s aunt always told him whenever they went to visit her summer cottage up in the mountains. The lakeside was the main attraction and the family was happy to splash around in the cool waters during the day, but it was absolutely off limits at night.

Eli never understood why. Whenever he asked his aunt about it, she would just shake her head and pick up the picture of her grown son who had vanished without a trace for ten years now. Eli was nearly twenty and on the adventurous side. What could possibly be going on in the placid waters that would make his aunt so distraught?

One balmy summer night, his aunt got a phone call from work. The hospital was understaffed and they needed her to work an overnight shift. Eli’s sister was out with her boyfriend that night which meant that he had the cottage to himself. His aunt hurried out the door, and gave him one last nervous glance.

“Just…be safe.” Was all she said.

Eli puttered around the empty house for a few hours but finally, the boredom got to him. He glanced out the window, seeing the moon rise over the mountains. It was a perfect night. At last his curiosity got the better of him, and he threw on his shoes and made his way outside.

The night air felt cool and refreshing against his skin, the rising moon filling the path ahead of him with silver light. It wasn’t so bad out here. He had no idea what his aunt had been so worried about. He came to the edge of the lake and gazed out at the mirror-smooth surface reflecting the gibbous moon. He reached down for a stone and skipped it five time over the surface of the water.

Without much else to do, he lay back and looked up at the starry sky, counting each one until he began to feel drowsy, the peaceful atmosphere lulling him. There was something else too, a distant sound that was tickling his ear, distracting him. For some reason, despite the chilly night air, he felt like he wanted to take off his shirt and feel the gentle breeze on his skin. His hands moved like they were being pulled on strings, pulling his t-shirt over his head. He felt the cool air tease his nipples sending ghost shivers through his spine.

He sat, listening to the choir of night noises buzzing in his head and decided he should take his socks and shoes off as well. Something about the sensuality of his bare feet touching the soft shore of the lake made him want to go completely nude.

Why not, after all? There was nobody around. Why shouldn’t he enjoy his moment of solitude in the middle of nature?

He chuckled, giddy as he took off his pants and underwear, baring himself to the sky, feeling more free and joyful than he had ever felt in his life. He left his clothes in a pile and started walking around the lake naked like an ancient lord of the wild.

He had walked maybe a quart of a mile when he suddenly noticed a strange shimmering in the middle of the lake that clearly wasn’t the moon’s reflection. He stopped and crouched low, suddenly panicked that he might be caught with his pants down, literally.

In the center of the lake was a glowing shape that seemed to hover and float above the surface of the water. The strange back and forth motion was oddly compelling, and Eli soon found that he couldn’t take his eyes off it. He peered closer, and his jaw dropped when he realized he was staring at the shape of a woman who almost seemed to be…dancing on the water.

She was beautiful! A stunning creature with long flowing hair that drifted around her head, glowing like a halo. It looked like she held her arms behind her back, thrusting two large, perky breasts forward, letting them jiggle and sway in the moonlight. Her flaring hips tapered into long, silky legs, but her what caught Eli the most were her eyes. They were dark, like the blackest midnight, and heavy-lidded as if the woman was enraptured in the throes of erotic pleasure.

Eli stared as the heavenly image swayed back and forth…back and forth…her luscious tits and hips swinging just a little off beat with each other. Eli knew he should be confused, scared, terrified maybe. But all he could feel as he watched the luminous dance was a sense of peace…tranquility…joy…

A smile began to cross his lips and he felt something tingle between his legs. He was getting aroused, completely hard as he watched the sexy vision weaving back and forth, his eyes constantly darting from her eyes, to her tits, to her hips, and then back to her tits again.

Before he knew what was happening, he felt himself standing up, unconcerned about whether the gorgeous woman of the lake saw him naked or not. His dick pointed at her like a compass and his legs began to carry him to the shore. He stood at the water’s edge, his arms hanging limply at his sides, his eyes wide as saucers drinking in more and more of the incredible sight of the woman’s body.

She swayed, he followed. Back and forth…back and forth…like a snake seducing its prey.

The woman’s dark eyes seemed to focus on him. Even though her mouth didn’t move, he heard a soft whisper in his mind.

Come closer…you want to come closer…

Part of Eli’s brain that was still his rebelled. He couldn’t just go skinny dipping with some…alien woman in the dead of night. He tried to blink, to walk away, but any thought of resistance just made his cock bulge harder, making him whimper with arousal.

Come closer…you want to see more…you want to touch…you need to come closer…

Yes…he needed this. It was a primal as hunger, as thirst. His raging cock was hijacking his higher faculties, insisting that he needed to swim out to this irresistible goddess of sex dancing and humming her sweet melody in the water.

Eli giggle a little, drool beginning to drip down his mouth as his foot touched the chilly water. He felt like he was drifting through his horniest dream. As soon as the ripples from his body reached the woman, her face lit up, silently encouraging him to float closer.

Yessss…come closer…

The water was up to his waist now and the sandy bottom of the lake quickly dropped out from under him. He let himself sink down to his neck, kicking his legs and waving his arms as he made a beeline for the tantalizing creature. The water felt perfect, like he was swimming through a pool of liquid sex, his hard cock bobbing weightless under the water.

Good…you are so aroused…don’t think…come closer…so happy…so horny…

Eli’s mind was filled with the woman’s full bouncy breasts as the grew larger and larger the closer he swam. He had to see more. He had to reach his hands out and touch her amazing body. Just a few more feet.

So wonderful…you feel so good…so sexy…you want to feel sexy…You want to CUM…

Yes! Yes! Just being next to her, gazing up at her otherworldly beauty from the water was like getting sucked off by the sweetest pair of lips in the world. The woman leaned forward, her glowing, gorgeous breasts wobbling enticingly in front of Eli’s face. He reached his hand out of the water towards her glorious rack.

As soon as he touched her, the water around him roiled. A ring of teeth the size of railroad spikes surrounded him, snapping close shut above him. The voluptuous, glowing woman fell into him, dragging him down under the icy water, as the gargantuan mouth dragged him under the depths of the lake.

Eli’s last thought was one of rapturous orgasm as he felt the wonderful skin of the alluring woman wrap around him, the image of her smiling face with dark eyes burned into his mind.

The next day, all the authorities could find of poor Eli was a pile of clothes and his shoes left by the side of the lake, but no search party was ever called to scour the lakebed. After all, it was common knowledge for everyone in town to never visit the lake at night.  

If you enjoy my writing, I love getting feedback and/or constructive, respectful criticism at amuscobblestone@gmail.com.  Follow my tumblr at www.tumblr.com/amuscobblestone 

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