Do Not Hold Back

Part 2

by S.B.

Tags: #dom:female #f/m #fantasy #femdom_hypnosis #mind_control #sub:male #supernatural

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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, events, and incidents are the products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual people, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. All the characters are over 18.

Jacob felt untethered, a sudden and disorienting dissolution of the familiar world. It was as if the boundaries between his thoughts and his physical existence had been erased, the membrane separating imagination from reality melting away under the heat of her presence. He moved through the apartment like a man sleepwalking, every surface slightly insubstantial yet more vivid than any waking moment he could remember. She was the source, the nucleus, the strange orbit around which his new life revolved.

It didn’t matter whether she’d emerged from the circuitry of his laptop, the cryptic algorithms of a dream, or some uncharted recess of his own psyche. She was here, now, and the only proof he needed was the immediacy of her touch. He was no longer sure if she was a figment of his imagination or something more, something that had materialized from his longing and fear. But none of that mattered, not when she commanded the atmosphere itself.

Eliza stood before him, her hands tracing a slow, deliberate path along the slope of his shoulders before coming to rest at the base of his neck. Her fingers were cool and certain, as if she’d mapped him in advance and knew every weakness, every nerve ending. She leaned in, her lips grazing his ear, her breath warm and measured. “I want you to be soft for me,” she whispered, the words a silken tether that bound him to her will. “Let everything else go.”

She cupped his face in her hands. Her thumb pressed against his bottom lip, parting it slightly, a small but unambiguous act of possession. Eliza’s eyes flickered with a hunger that felt almost sacred, as if she were about to consume him in a ritual older than language.

“Are you ready to surrender completely?” she asked, her tone so soft it seemed to bypass sound altogether and resonate directly in his bones.

Jacob nodded, for there was no other response possible. He felt himself dissolve in the space between her question and his answer, the world narrowing to her eyes and her voice.

“Good,” she murmured, lips curling into a smile that was both approval and promise. “Then close your eyes. I want you to imagine me taking control. Picture what I will do to you, how I will own every part of your body and mind.”

Jacob obeyed. Behind closed eyelids, her directives became his architecture. He imagined her approaching—a silhouette backlit by the faint afterglow of his computer screen, heels moving with predatory grace in the hush of early morning. She circled him, assessing, calibrating, before stepping into the light. Her dress shifted with each breath, the fabric whispering against her skin. She was infinitely more real in this conjured space than he’d ever dared to invent on his own.

She reached for his shirt and, with a slow, deliberate motion, slid her hands beneath the fabric. The sensation was electric, her palms flat against his chest, her nails just sharp enough to remind him of her intent. She peeled the garment away, exposing him inch by inch, as if every button undone was a layer of him relinquished. He could feel her breath on his skin, each exhalation a claim staked deeper into his body.

Eliza’s lips pressed softly against the side of his neck, a brief punctuation before descending in a trail of heat that made his whole body tighten. Each kiss was precise, orchestrated, not the chaotic hunger of mutual need but the calculated progression of a master at work. Her teeth grazed his collarbone, and the pain was a jolt of clarity in the blur of sensation.

She knelt in front of him, her eyes never leaving his, and her hands moved to his belt. She unfastened it with a practiced flick, the metallic click loud in the silence. His pants followed, pooling at his ankles, and she regarded him, exposed and shivering, with a mixture of amusement and satisfaction.

“Look at yourself,” she said, voice steady and unhurried. “Do you see how easily you give yourself away? How much you want to be stripped bare?”

His mind was a blur of desire and embarrassment and relief. Jacob remained standing, trembling, barely able to process the sensations running through him. All that mattered was the gravity of her will and the certainty of her control.

She rose and stepped behind him, her arms wrapping around his shoulders. Her hands moved to his wrists, guiding them behind his back with gentle insistence. In his mind’s eye, he saw her produce a length of red silk and wrap it around his wrists, binding him. The scarf was not tight, but the symbolism was absolute. He was hers, now, thoroughly and entirely.

Her fingers trailed along his spine, each vertebra a key she pressed in sequence. When she spoke, the words were an invocation, bypassing his ears and echoing directly in his skull.

“Kneel.”

The command sliced through him. He obeyed instantly, dropping to the hardwood, his knees settling into the grain. The floor was cold, grounding, but her warmth radiated above him. She cupped the back of his head, forcing him to tilt his chin up and meet her gaze. The act was as intimate as it was degrading, and he felt a surge of gratitude for the certainty she provided.

“Tell me what you are,” she said.

He hesitated, but only for a moment. The answer came without conscious thought. “Yours,” he whispered, eyes wide, voice hoarse. “I’m yours.”

A slow smile spread across her face, and she bent down, brushing her lips against his forehead. “That’s right,” she said. “You’re mine. Every thought, every impulse, every secret you’re ashamed to admit.”

She paced around him, a slow orbit, her hand trailing along the top of his head as if he were a favored pet or a trophy newly acquired. Jacob shivered, feeling every nerve ending tuned to her movements. When she stopped, she pressed her palm against his chest, feeling his heart gallop beneath his ribs.

“Do you really want to serve me?” she asked, her nails digging in just enough to make him gasp.

“Yes,” he replied. He meant it. He meant it in a way that terrified him.

“Then show me,” she said, and reached for the laptop again.

He did not think; he did not pause. He typed, each word another brick in the cathedral of her dominance. He described her power in language that made him blush. He wrote of craving her discipline, of wanting to kneel at her feet, to be molded by her whims. He told her, through the screen, what he couldn’t say out loud: that he wanted to be humiliated, used, and craved her approval no matter the cost.

She read over his shoulder, her breath hot against his skin. Occasionally, she would correct a line, highlight a word, and replace it with something more precise, more degrading,g or beautiful. With each edit, she rewrote not just the paragraph but Jacob himself, whittling away his resistance until only the marrow of submission remained.

Eliza pressed her lips to his temple. “You’re learning quickly,” she said, and it was impossible to know if she meant the writing or the obedience, or if they were, by now, the same.

Her fingers returned to his body, exploring, claiming new territory. She ran her hands down his arms, over his bound wrists, then further, tracing the outline of his hips, his thighs, each touch a signifier of intent. She wanted him to know exactly how little control he had, and how much pleasure he would find in relinquishing it.

She whispered instructions, and he followed. She told him to kneel lower, to bow his head, to speak only when spoken to. She made him recite lines from the story they’d written together, each sentence a vow, each word an offering. He felt himself regress, distill, become a simpler creature: a vessel for service, a mouth for praise, a body for her delight.

At some point, his sense of time fractured. Hours could have passed or mere minutes. All he knew was her: the scent, the sound, the sensation of being remade by her every whim. Jacob was exhausted, emptied, and yet so full of gratitude he could barely contain it. He gasped, arched, but held still, desperate to please.

“Do you trust me completely?” Eliza asked, her voice slicing through Jacob’s fog of need and exhaustion. He nodded, not merely because he knew it was expected, but because it was true. He had never trusted anyone so fully: not lovers, not parents, not even himself. The urge to please her had long since overpowered his capacity for doubt.

“Yes, Eliza,” he said, his voice barely above a rasp, and she rewarded him with a smile, a subtle upturn of her lips that was both vindication and invitation. She stepped behind him and untied the red silk, the scarf slipping away from his wrists with the lightest tug. There was no urgency or flourish, just the ritual of it, and even this small act of compassion felt like a benediction.

He kept his arms pinned tight to his sides, unwilling to move even a centimeter without her express direction. Immobilized by the magnitude of her attention, Jacob felt not freed but further bound, only now, by a force entirely internal.

“Excellent,” Eliza said, the word a verdict and a reward in itself, and placed a hand on his shoulder, pushing him so that his chest met the floor. She followed, not simply climbing atop him but enveloping him, draping her body along the length of his back.

The weight of her was at once oppressive and exquisite, a living shroud that eliminated any last vestige of space between them. She pressed the side of her face against his, her hair spilling around his cheek, and let her breath fan across his ear. The sensation was almost unbearably intimate.

He could feel her heartbeat thudding through her ribcage, a steady, predatory rhythm that set the cadence for his own pulse. She adjusted her hips so that she was perfectly aligned with him, her breasts flattening against his shoulders, her thighs bracketing his own.

There was nothing hypothetical or performative in the closeness—she was an event, an element, his atmosphere and his weather, her totality exerting downward pressure until he surrendered fully to the fact of her. His arms, tingling from their prior restraint, instinctively reached forward, palms pressing flat to the boards as if he were bracing himself for some imminent impact. But she held him in place, her arms curling around his midsection, her grip both gentle and absolute.

She did not speak; she didn’t need to. The point was made by the arrangement of their bodies: he was pinned, possessed, rendered into an object of comfort and utility. The memory of her earlier commands echoed in his mind, but now it was accompanied by the undeniable reality of her warmth, her scent, the soft insistence of her breath at the nape of his neck.

For several minutes, Eliza simply lay there, her body rising and falling with each inhale, her fingers tracing absent, lazy patterns across his chest and stomach. The silence was not empty but vibrating with intent. He reveled in the paradox, being held down and held together, humiliated and cherished. The edge of shame had dulled, replaced by a sort of grateful peace he’d never known.

He could have stayed like that for hours, days, breathing only by the force of her proximity. Without warning, Eliza shifted her weight and whispered into his ear, her tone low and unctuous. “Do you know why I unbound you?” she asked, her lips grazing his skin. He shook his head, afraid to speak, afraid to break the spell of her attention. She nipped at his earlobe, not hard enough to hurt but enough to make him gasp. “Because you’re mine,” she said. “I don’t need to tie you up to keep you exactly where I want you. I only need to ask.”

The words hit him with the force of a revelation. He was no longer just pretending to be powerless; he had become it, had been crafted into this shape by her relentless, patient study. The scarf was a formality, an accessory. His real bondage was in the way he longed for her approval, the way her words rewrote his boundaries and his needs. She lay on top of him a little while longer, her body a warm, living blanket, her nails idly tracing the outline of his ribs, his hips, his thighs. Every movement was a reminder of what she had taken from him, and what she had given in return.

She leaned in once more, her lips nearly brushing his ear, her voice low and silken and dark. “Tomorrow, I want you to keep writing about me,” she commanded. Her breath was warm and scented with something both medicinal and sweet. “Let yourself dream. Imagine what I will do to you, all the ways you’ll be made to serve. This is not finished. It has only just begun.” She punctuated the promise with a slow drag of her fingertips along his jawline, as if to remind him whose flesh he wore now.

In the echoing silence that followed, Jacob felt his chest constrict with a paradoxical mix of gratitude and dread. He could not have said what he feared or desired more: the possibility of being left alone again, or the prospect of further, deeper surrender. He was bone-tired. He was giddy. He was afraid of the morning, and what would be required of him.

Eliza released him. Jacob remained motionless, even as his muscles screamed in protest. The red scarf—limp, trailing from her fist—was now a relic, no longer necessary. She smiled at him over her shoulder, and strode to the window.

She drew the curtain aside. Night had settled with complete authority, the cityscape transformed into a mosaic of distant, blinking lights. For a wild moment, Jacob wondered if someone out there could see him, naked and exposed as he was, humiliated and sanctified by her regard. He realized he wanted to be seen, wanted the world to know what she had made of him. Every secret longing now seemed paltry when placed next to the grandeur of confessed submission.

He waited. Time expanded outward, each second a ringing bell. He wondered if she would return to him, or if this was all, if he was now supposed to crawl back to the desk and begin the next chapter at her command. But Eliza had made him a vessel for her caprice, and so he waited, kneeling, head bowed, until she called him over.

“Jacob,” she said, her voice liquid with satisfaction. “Come here.”

He rose and crossed the room. She regarded him as if seeing him for the first time, then reached up and brushed his hair aside, inspecting the seam of his face, the flush along his jaw, the vulnerability in his eyes. He began to shiver, less from the cold than from the intensity of the moment, the way she seemed to see through him. She pressed her palm to his cheek, thumb tracing the corner of his mouth.

“Do you remember what you wrote for me?” she asked.

He nodded, swallowing hard.

“Tomorrow, you’ll write more,” she said, “but with a difference. This time, you won’t invent a fantasy. You’ll describe in exact detail what happened tonight. Every word, every gesture. You’ll make a record of your own undoing, and you’ll send it to me before sunrise.”

He quailed, but there was no room for protest. The work was already underway, the first sentence already taking form in his mind. He longed for her approval, even as the prospect of cataloguing his own humiliation made his skin prickle with shame. She smiled at his distress and drew him close again.

“Do it well,” she said, “and maybe, just maybe, I’ll let you sleep.”

With that, she turned him by the shoulders and guided him to the couch, where she laid him down, curling up beside him as if nothing extraordinary had transpired. But even in her repose, she radiated control. She draped her arm across his chest and drew him into her, her fingers idly tapping a rhythm against his skin, an unspoken reminder of the terms of their new understanding.

Jacob kept perfectly still, afraid to break the spell, and let himself be held. He lay there, mute and reverent, as the minutes crawled toward morning. He was uncertain when she finally drifted off, her breath softening, her grip loosening just enough to allow for the possibility of escape. But he knew, with the clarity of a man who has glimpsed his fate, that he would not, could not, leave her side. Not until she released him.

He waited until her breathing settled, then, with infinite care, extricated himself from her arms and padded across the cold wood floor. He settled at the desk, cracked his knuckles, and set his fingers to the keys. The screen glowed, blank and expectant.

He hesitated, heart hammering, then began to write exactly what she had asked for. Every word was a reckoning; every sentence, a link in the chain she had forged for him. He wrote until the sky turned from ink to pewter and the city outside started to hum with the beginnings of day.

When Jacob finally finished, he slumped over the keyboard, drained but exhilarated. He emailed the document to her imaginary address, the subject line simply: Yours.

He stood, stretched, and felt an unaccustomed lightness in his chest, as if he had been emptied of something toxic and filled with a cleaner, brighter element.

The sun crept above the skyline, painting their apartment with pale, uncertain gold. It was Saturday. He remembered, with a faint twinge, that he had no plans for the day, no obligations, nothing left that could compete with the gravity of what had happened. He wandered the kitchen in a daze, poured himself a glass of water, and stared at the condensation pearling along the rim. He was surprised to discover that he felt not regret or shame, but a kind of peace that was unfamiliar and entirely welcome.

Jacob remembered her words: This is only the beginning. He believed her and was ready to follow her wherever she led.

The End

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