The Queen Is Pleased

by S.B.

Tags: #dom:female #femdom_hypnosis #mind_control #scifi #sub:male

An alien entity controls Xander.

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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, events, and incidents are the products of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual people, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. All the characters are over 18.

Xander’s awareness flickered in and out as the pressure of the hexagonal table dug into his back, grounding him in the fluorescence oozing from the spacecraft’s throbbing walls. He blinked, struggling to make sense of the symbols etched into the cold metal. They were iridescent glyphs that seemed, with each glance, to crawl and rearrange themselves into patterns that mocked the very logic of language. Every time he looked away, they clung to his vision like afterimages, their stark lines slicing through the soupy air. On cue, the walls moved again, the membrane stretching and contracting as though breathing in rhythm with his rising panic.

To his left, a wriggling mass of tentacles clustered in an alcove, their glassy surfaces reflecting the fever-bright lights. They moved with the unity of a single organism, following his every shudder. A hush blanketed the room, broken only by a low, omnipresent thrum, as if the ship itself was alive and humming to itself, a lullaby for the damned. The hum vibrated through the table and into Xander’s bones, settling a notched ache deep inside his skull that threatened to split his consciousness in two. The air itself was dense and carried a metallic scent that stung his nose and threatened to choke every word in his throat.

He thrashed against the restraints binding his limbs, their alien polymer so fine it felt like air until it bit into his skin when he moved. His wrists burned. The agony radiated up his arms and into his shoulders, where it blossomed into a sharp, bright pain. He arched his back to relieve the pressure, but the table’s edges pressed harder into his scapula, pinning him immobile. Every instinct screamed to fight, but the effort only made the bonds cinch tighter.

A slick noise, like a wet rag wrung dry, made him freeze. He looked down, and a midnight-blue tentacle separated itself from the mass at his feet and began its ascent. It undulated over his ankle and up the calf, its sucker-lined underside gleaming with a viscous, clear mucus. The tentacle’s touch was colder than ice. Xander recoiled, but the motion only brought the appendage higher, wrapping itself around his thigh and squeezing as it climbed.

“No… no… no… fuck!” He tried to buck the table, but the force of his terror only sent him sliding helplessly against the restraints. The tentacle’s tip split open along a seam, revealing row after row of tiny teeth, each one brimming with black, inky saliva. The jaws latched onto his leg just above the knee, and he screamed as the teeth sank through his pants and into his flesh. The pain was immediate, but also eerily distant, as if his body already belonged to something else.

Desperate, Xander scanned the room. The shifting symbols and the pulsing walls all seemed to conspire against him, drawing his gaze back to the ceiling, where a new pattern now glinted: a circle enclosing a triangle, enclosing an eye that watched him, unblinking and eternal. He sensed a presence behind the symbols, a dark intelligence that evaluated his every thought and movement.

Another jolt of agony lanced up his leg as the tentacle released its bite. Instead of blood, a thick black ooze seeped from the puncture and crept outward, spreading beneath his skin like a living tattoo. Panic surged anew. His limbs were already going numb, the sensation of cold spreading to every nerve. A second tentacle joined the first, winding up his other leg, and savoring the moment.

The membrane at the base of Xander’s skull tingled; he could feel, like an aftershock, the alien’s gaze fixing onto the exact point needed to immobilize him further. The tentacle at his thigh snaked up to his abdomen, then over his sternum, tracing the lines of his ribs as if mapping the structure for later consumption. The young man’s shirt shredded under its grip.

Another tentacle approached from above, this one thinner, its tip a glistening bulb. It hovered above his face, dripping a single bead of black fluid onto his cheek. The droplet sizzled against his skin, and Xander convulsed, bile rising in the back of his throat. The bulb hovered for a moment, then delicately pressed itself against his lips. He clenched his jaw, but the tentacle was patient, stroking his face with a perverse gentleness until he gasped for breath and the bulb forced itself inside.

The taste was mind-shattering, like overripe fruit gone to rot. The fluid coated Xander’s tongue and burned its way down his throat. The tentacle pulsed, pumping more of the dark ichor into his mouth, and his consciousness began to fragment. Every sense was amplified and distorted, a chorus of colors, smells, and sounds so vivid they overwrote his memories. He couldn’t remember his name or why he’d ever wanted to escape.

On the table, Xander’s body convulsed as the restraints tightened, then abruptly loosened with a metallic snap. He barely registered his newfound freedom, disoriented by the onslaught of sensation. Blindly, he rolled off the table and crashed to the floor, the impact knocking the wind from his lungs. The tentacle mass descended from the wall, and he scrambled to his feet, staggering forward.

He made for a membrane at the far wall, its surface rippling like the skin of a drum. He crashed through and was greeted by a corridor that spiraled into darkness, its walls lined with floating pods. Each pod was filled with the same black fluid, in which suspended bodies twitched in the throes of their own private nightmares. Xander tore his gaze away, unwilling to see if he recognized any of the faces.

The corridor sloped downward. With each step, the black ichor in his veins pulsed alongside the ship, urging him deeper into the labyrinth. Behind him, the tentacles followed, their clicking teeth and rasping caresses echoing through the hall.

Ahead, the passage forked. The left branch was a dead end. To the right, the corridor narrowed to a slit barely wide enough for him to squeeze through. He shouldered his way into the tight space. Halfway through, the passage constricted even further, and for a moment he panicked, certain he would be crushed. Then the walls relaxed, as if the ship was allowing him to pass, and he stumbled out into a circular chamber.

The chamber was cathedral-like, its floor a mosaic of living tissue. At the far end, enthroned on a dais constructed from bone and metal, sat the alien queen. She was immense, her body composed of sinew and glass, her skin a translucent blue that shimmered with every twitch. Her limbs were all tentacles too, dozens of them, each one flexing and reaching in a slow, hypnotic dance. Her bottomless eyes were locked onto Xander.

The moment he stopped moving, two of the queen’s tentacles shot out and seized him by the shoulders, hoisting him aloft. He dangled, helpless, as the appendages tightened around his chest, ribs creaking under the pressure. Another pair of tentacles wrapped around his head, cradling it with the care of a lover. He opened his mouth to scream, but the tentacle bulb had already primed his brain to obey.

“Slaves don’t get to run,” the queen intoned. His mind was a blank slate now, every thought reduced to one throbbing imperative: obey. His cock hung heavy and rigid between his thighs, the head already slick with pre-cum that dripped onto the floor. He felt nothing except the wet heat of the tentacles sliding over his skin, tasting him.

She loomed above him, her voice echoing inside his rewritten brain. “On your knees, slave. Show me what you’re good for.”

Xander dropped instantly, the tentacles guiding his descent, so his ass hit the floor with a soft slap. The air in the chamber was thick and humid, smelling of brine and musk. His nostrils flared as he inhaled it, cock twitching at the scent alone. Inner thoughts flickered through the obedience: This is what I am now. Hard. Ready. Hers.

One thick tentacle coiled around the base of his shaft, squeezing just tight enough to make his balls draw up tight. It stroked him in slow, deliberate pulls, the suction cups latching onto the sensitive underside and rippling. Another tentacle pressed between his ass cheeks, the pointed tip circling his hole before pushing inside with a wet squelch. Xander groaned, his hips jerking forward into the stroking tentacle while the one in his ass twisted deeper, filling him whole.

“Fuck,” he rasped, the word slipping out unbidden. “It’s so deep!”

The queen’s laughter resonated through his skull. “Slaves don’t speak unless commanded. But your cock tells me everything I need to know.” The tentacle in his ass pumped harder, the ridges dragging against his prostate with every thrust. Precum poured in steady strings, the tentacle around his cock smearing it up and down his length until the wet sounds filled the chamber. He could taste the salt of his own arousal on the air, feel the burn in his thighs as he fought not to thrust too wildly.

Another pair of tentacles wrapped his wrists, yanking them behind his back in a tight bondage hold. They squeezed, the pressure sending sparks up his spine. His nipples tightened, hypersensitive, as a thinner tentacle flicked across one, then the other, the suction cup latching on and tugging rhythmically. Xander’s breath came in harsh pants. Can’t think. Just feel. Cock aching. Ass stretched. Need to come.

“Look at you,” the queen giggled. “Leaking like a desperate whore. Beg for it.”

“Please,” he choked out, the word torn from the obedience wired into him. “Use me. Fuck my ass harder. Let me come on your tentacles.”

She obliged. The tentacle in his ass swelled, stretching him wider as it fucked him in deep, relentless strokes. The one around his cock tightened and twisted, the suction cups milking him in time with the thrusts. His prostate was pounded relentlessly, every impact sending jolts of white-hot pleasure through his gut. Sweat slicked his skin; the tentacles were cool and wet against the heat of his body, the contrast making every sensation sharper.

“Come for your queen. Flood the floor like the broken toy you are,” the alien commanded.

Xander’s orgasm hit like a volcanic eruption. His cock jerked in the tentacle’s grip, thick ropes of cum shooting out in heavy pulses that splattered across the chamber. His ass clenched hard around the invading tentacle, milking it as waves of forced pleasure rolled through him. His vision whited out, body shaking in the living exoskeleton’s hold, every nerve singing with the intensity. Inner thoughts dissolved into pure sensation: Owned. Used. Perfect.

The tentacles didn’t stop. They kept stroking and thrusting, drawing out every last spurt until he was trembling and oversensitive, cum dripping from his spent cock. The queen’s voice vibrated through him one last time.

“Good slave. Now clean it up with your tongue.”

Xander leaned forward without hesitation, the tentacles supporting him as he licked his own mess from the floor, the salty bitterness sharp on his tongue, the humiliation and arousal twisting together into fresh heat in his gut. He was hers. Completely.

“Slaves obey,” the alien queen hissed, her tentacles flexing in smug satisfaction. “Never forget that.”

* * *

“Slaves obey,” Xander croaked, the words dropping from his mouth like heavy stones as he pressed his forehead to the concrete. He licked his lips, tasting the bitter tang of semen on his tongue, the humiliation making his cock twitch again, even as his thighs trembled from the aftershock. He dragged his tongue across the cold floor, tracking the glistening trail of his own cum, and lapping it up with desperate, mindless fervor.

Behind him, the queen’s tentacles rippled in a slow, lazy dance, savoring the spectacle of their captive so thoroughly broken. Except, of course, there was no queen. The tentacles were real enough—silicone, mounted to the walls and pulleys of the dungeon—but the mind behind them belonged to Mistress Jennifer, whose hands cradled the remote and whose voice, now pitched low and resonant, echoed through Xander’s suggestible mind as the only authority in the universe. It was the hypnodomme’s favorite trick, the layering of reality and fantasy so finely that the subject lost track of the border.

Xander’s cheeks were streaked with tears and sweat, but his gaze was blank, unblinking, and his posture perfectly subservient. She’d never had a client so easy to drop. A few words, a passing touch, and he slipped beneath the surface, all higher functions subsumed by the persona she implanted in his head.

“Slaves always obey,” Mistress Jennifer purred, the cadence of her voice shifting from imperious alien to playful Domme as she pressed the next trigger. She snapped her fingers, and Xander’s body stiffened, then relaxed utterly, his face going slack as the new command slid into place.

For a moment, Jennifer allowed herself the pleasure of simple observation. She watched the way his lips moved and the mechanical hunger with which he cleaned the floor. It was glorious!

She’d spent years honing her craft, a blend of a psych degree and low-grade sociopathy, and she took pride in her ability to utterly reshape the mind of the man kneeling in front of her now. A glance at the wall clock: twenty-seven minutes left in the session. Enough time for at least two more cycles, maybe three if she didn’t linger on the aftercare.

Jennifer sat back on her throne, an antique dentist’s chair she’d found at a flea market and upholstered herself, and crossed her legs, savoring the moment. Xander knelt before her, slick with saliva and humiliation, his mouth still working the words: Slaves obey. Slaves obey.

He wasn’t faking it, not even a little. She knew the difference. Some clients wanted to be forced but still clung, somewhere, to the illusion of consent. Xander, however, was a rare breed. He was always eager to be obliterated, and to have every part of himself rewritten and under someone else’s control.

She held up a hand and flicked two fingers. Instantly, Xander rolled onto his back, exposing his spent, leaking cock. His limbs splayed out like a puppet, as if he’d been waiting his whole life for that single gesture of permission. Jennifer allowed herself a small, private smile. She’d have to remember this script for future use; the alien angle was always popular, but the way he responded to the language of hierarchy and invasion was pure gold.

The hypnodomme pressed another button on the remote, and the tentacles whirred to life again, the one nearest his thighs lowering with gentle, almost affectionate intent. Xander shuddered as the tip traced up his inner thigh, pausing just beneath his balls, where it stroked circles with the clinical patience of a probe. He whimpered, hips lifting in offering. She leaned forward, letting her voice drop to a whisper that would buzz straight through the earpiece in his left ear canal. “Clean yourself, slave. Use your hands. The queen is watching.”

Xander’s hands moved instantly, scooping the slick mess from his chest and groin, bringing it up to his mouth. He sucked his fingers noisily, eyes rolled back, the trance so deep now he would’ve eaten glass if told to. He looked utterly broken, a beautiful, ruined thing. She watched in fascination as his cock, impossibly, began to stiffen again, another wave of arousal flooding his system even as he slurped up the remnants of his last orgasm. She let him work for another minute, savoring the tableau, before speaking again.

“That’s enough, Xander. Present yourself for inspection.” He crawled forward on elbows and knees, chin tucked, hands flat on the floor. When he reached her feet, he pressed his forehead to the cold tile and waited, silent, perfectly still. Jennifer extended a single, patent-leather boot and placed it beneath his chin, lifting his gaze to hers. For the first time since the session began, she let her own human face show: a quirk of the mouth, a glint of approval in her eyes.

“You’ve done well,” she said. “Your owner is pleased.” His eyes shone with gratitude, and for a split-second, something like true joy flickered behind the glassy trance. Jennifer held the moment, then snapped her fingers again, sealing the new memory in place. She checked the clock. Twenty minutes left. Just enough time to break him all over again, and rebuild him stronger. She released the trigger, letting the next scenario form within his subconscious, eager for the new permutation of need and surrender that would emerge. And as Xander sagged, happy to lose himself again, Jennifer leaned back on her throne and continued to fuck his mind.

The End

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