The gentle way the mind control happens is wonderful. A literal climax of hotness atthe end. If like me you desire to be Altered, this is a story you can have beautiful dreams about.

This was a good read! I can’t write much without making the story less enjoyable to read, but I’ll write this: that was a very novel way to get one’s phone number to someone else! I’m not a big fan of the “withholding trope”, but I doubt very much “withholding” is going to happen (it certainly didn’t happen in this story). ;) Recommended.